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It’s always very depressing when a special event is cancelled by forces out of your control. One example: weather. For instance, Jamie Morè was on a date with her boyfriend when suddenly it began to rain. The young couple had taken refuge under a large tree in the park, being neither was dressed to for such conditions. Jamie cuddled into her boyfriend’s arms, while he combed her hair with his fingers.
“It’s raining cats and dogs out there,” She commented, grimacing at the down-pour.
Steven, her boyfriend, paused before replying: “Yeah. Hey, that reminds me: I got you this…” He reached into his back-pocket and pulled out a bedraggled little doll. It looked like a humanoid dog-girl.  He handed it to her and she smiled sheepishly.
“Oh Steven, thank you!” She leaned over and pecked him on the cheek, which turn into a fierce kiss. Though Jamie did think the gift was odd, she thought the gesture was very sweet.
They were now laying on each other, Jamie starting to peel off his wet shirt when suddenly she was feeling an ache in her abdomen. She sat back up; not noticing how much interest was in Steven’s eyes.
Jamie felt at her backbone until reaching the tip, where she acknowledged a bulge in her tail-bone. Blushing slightly she craned neck and looked back; it was a merely a nub, but clearly an extension of her spine. She turned back to her boyfriend, assuring him that nothing was wrong.
“Now, where were we?” Jamie murmured, laying over him and kissing him greedily. It was then that a muscle in her back went into spasm. She had never felt such thing before and reluctantly she sat back up to examine herself. Jamie immediately looked to the odd bump on her tail-bone, but what she saw was so strange she let out a gasp. The bump, which had nearly tripled in the length, was wagging wildly…like a tail.
She turned back around very slowly. “Steven…there’s something wrong. I need to go home.” Jamie told him, beginning to stand up. The unique abscess had stopped wagging by now, but started up again when Steven grabbed her hand and pulled her back down. He stared into her eyes and smiled.
“What’s wrong?” He asked her. “You can tell me.”
She felt hypnotized by his sweet voice. Jamie gulped and said: “I…well…” She stuttered and then turned, pulling down the edge of her pants to reveal the bump. It gave her goose-bumps as his fingers went over her back and down the tail. But it was a nasty shock to discover that something soft was brushing against her skin with his touch.
Oh no…
Jamie forced herself to look back at it, and she regretted it instantly. The tail was now at least two feet long and covered in a coat of chestnut fur; it contrasted nicely with her dark brown hair. But, Jamie didn’t think so.  She broke down in embarrassment. “Steven, look at it! I’ve grown a tail! What am I going to do?!” She sobbed, using the doll to dab her eyes.
Jamie didn’t notice that the doll no longer had a tail.
“We’ll go to my house.” Steven said almost instantly. “My parents are…away. We can go there and get this settled for good.” He took her hand and they stood up together. Steven wrapped himself around her, hiding her tail, and the two left the shelter of a tree. Quickly going through the rain, they reached Steven’s house in no time. He unlocked the door and led her inside while a chorus of barking rang through the house.
Jamie looked around in confusion. “What’s with the—?”
“My girls…dogs.” Steven cut her off and smiled, gesturing for her to sit on the couch. She obeyed very quickly, almost too quickly.
Jamie watched him go into his kitchen to retrieve some ointment. She sighed. I have a tail. I have a TAIL! Jamie wiped away her tears, but paused when her hand brushed against a layer of fuzz. Panicking, she rubbed her face again and cried in shock as her fingers met with hair. “Oh God!” She moaned, pulling out her pocket-mirror.
Jamie looked at herself and confirmed that a layer of fur had sprouted on her face. And her nose was starting to turn to a dark, leathery form…
“Steven!” She shrieked, watching the changes slowly progress. Her ears were beginning to grow flat and floppy. “Steven!” Jamie repeated frantically.
He replied from the kitchen: “I’ll be back soon! Stay calm.”
Jamie sobbed and moaned, feeling the fur sprouting elsewhere. She removed her clothes down to her undergarments, watching the hair grow before her very eyes. Jamie cringed as her toes grew large and paw-like, and the same fate was bound to her hands.
All the while, the strange dog-girl doll was becoming more and more human. But though its body was now hairless and its paws were now hands and feet, it still had a muzzle. Jamie still hadn’t noticed this strange occurrence, because she was now twitching pain. Her skull was grinding and throbbing while it elongated.
“Steven!” She sobbed as fangs slid between her dark lips. And finally, he appeared. Jamie’s tail thumped at his presence but she was still in great agony. He didn’t smile, or show in emotion as he reached for her neck and clicked on a collar. Jamie’s stretching jaw fell open. “Steven, what are you…?”
He grabbed her by the collar and commanded her to follow him. She obeyed without hesitation, no matter how hard she tried to resist. Steven took her down in to the basement, where he flipped on the light and revealed rows upon rows of large kennels. The barking sounded off again only this time she could see that these were not dogs…not entirely, at least.
They were anthros, just like her. Jamie looked around in horror as he led her to an empty kennel. The first thing she noticed was that all of these dog-girls were incredibly attractive; they had perfect figures with full breasts and silky hair. They yipped happily as Steven paused to stroke a couple of their faces. She found herself longing for his touch as well.
“Well, Jamie, I’d like you to be comfortable. I wouldn’t do this to you if I didn’t love you…I love all my girls.” Steven told her, clearly reciting a well-practiced speech. “You’re number twelve of my girls…it began with my parents, for heaven knows they needed to be first.” He pointed to two kennels that were side by side. One held a blonde beagle-girl, while the other golden retriever humanoid had a boyish haircut and was thumping her tail wildly.
Jamie looked around in horror. These poor people… She thought, and then noticed that none of these girls looked upset. In fact, they seemed very happy. All of them had big smiles and thumping tails. She cocked her head.
“I make sure that all my girls are very happy,” Steven continued, as if reading her thoughts. “And soon, you will be too.” He leaned down next to Jamie’s kennel and patted her muzzle gently. Her tail wagged and she stuck her face through the bars to allow him to kiss her wet nose. It was true, she was now very happy.
Steven stood up and went toward the door. Before he flipped off the light, he murmured: “Good night, girls.”

Jamie Morè and recieves a strange doll from her new boyfriend, Steven. Strangely, he seems to be the one who benefits.
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CreepyWarriorPony Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015
Interesting story; it's very well written!
Werewolfgirl8813 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
But very good story
Werewolfgirl8813 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
ElectronicPVP Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016
StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great! But what is wrong with that guy!?
wilvine2345 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Very good work,Loving all your stories so far.
TheDarkNeon Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Jeez. Boys certainly have their obsessions...

Nice work Grace. ^^
thegrace Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
Thanks! (:
BlueMoonKin Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
interesting. kinda reminds me of a show i saw on scifi except it was the boyfriend that was tf'ed
thegrace Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
Ooh. Do you remember the name of the show? ;3
BlueMoonKin Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it might have been beyond belief: fact or fiction but i'm not sure. i've only seen the episode once and that was a long time ago.
thegrace Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
Oh well. I'll see if I can search it up. Thanks anyways. (:
Destiny3000 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent, although I haven't read all of it yet... it IS excellent, just like what ~digitalcirce said!
digitalcirce Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Excellent work! This was a very enjoyable read.
thegrace Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
Thank you. :)
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